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quorum-key-management/src/component-documents/ceremony-repository.md

@@ -31,9 +31,9 @@ ceremonies/
     <date>/
         log.txt
             - [ ] TODO: write a layout for the log
-        workflow_payloads/
+        payloads/
-            workflow_payload_<num>.json
+            payload_<num>.json
-            workflow_payload_<num>.json.sig
+            payload_<num>.json.sig
 blockchain_metadata/
     sol_nonce_address.txt
 policies/

quorum-key-management/src/component-documents/hardware-procurement-and-chain-of-custody.md

@@ -14,9 +14,7 @@ The following steps must all be completed under the continued supervision and wi
 
 1. Selecting a Purchase Location
 
-    * Select at least 4 stores which carry the type of equipment being purchased, then randomly select one using the roll of a die, or other random method. This is done in order to reduce the likelihood that an insider threat is able to plant a compromised computer in a store ahead of time.
+    * Select at multiple stores which carry the type of equipment being purchased, then randomly select one using the roll of a die, or other random method. This is done in order to reduce the likelihood that an insider threat is able to plant a compromised computer in a store ahead of time.
- 
-        * Each participant should choose 2 of the stores.
 
 1. Within the store, identify available adequate device
 

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/basic-requirements.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
 * [Personal PGP key pair](/key-types.md#personal-pgp-keypair) 
 
-* Tamper-proofing equipment
+* [Tamper-proofing equipment](/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/procurer/procure-tamper-proofing-equipment.html)
 
 // ANCHOR_END: requirements
 /* ANCHOR_END: all */

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/operator/ceremony-sd-card-provisioning.md

@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@
 
 1. Navigate to the ceremony repository for the ceremony being executed
 
-1. Create a directory called `workflow-inputs` on the SD card
+1. Create a directory called `payloads/` on the SD card
 
-1. Copy all transaction workflow payloads from the appropriate dated directory found in `ceremonies/workflow-payloads/<date>` into  the `workflow-payloads/` directory on the SD card
+1. Copy all transaction workflow payloads from the appropriate dated directory found in `ceremonies/payloads/<date>` into  the `payloads/` directory on the SD card
 
 1. Copy the `shardfile.asc` from the ceremony repository onto the SD card
 

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/procurer/index.md

@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@ The procurer is responsible for:
 
 * Procuring equipment
 
-    * Tamper proofing equipment
+    * [Tamper proofing equipment](procure-tamper-proofing-equipment.md)
 
-    * Hardware (computers, sd cards, sd card adapters, smart cards, cameras etc.)
+    * [Hardware](procure-hardware.md) (computers, sd cards, sd card adapters, smart cards, cameras etc.)
 
 * Ensuring equipment is properly tamper proofed
 

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/proposer/create-transaction-payload.md

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ The proposer must combine these values into a single message, which can be a sim
 
 ## Requirements
 
-* If necessary, provision a PGP key pair to a smart card using the guide in the [Appendix: Generating PGP Keypair & Provisioning Smart Card](#generating-pgp-keypair--provisioning-smart-card)
+* [Personal PGP Key](../operator/pgp-key-provisioning.md) or [On-Board PGP Key](../../../all-levels/provision-pgp-signing-keys-on-board-smart-card.md)
 
 * Ensure that the computer is configured to sign commits with the desired key. Refer to the [Appendix: Git Commit Signing Configuration](#git-commit-signing-configuration)
 
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ The proposer must combine these values into a single message, which can be a sim
 
 ## Procedure
 
-1. Define a new file `workflow_payload_<num>.json`, for example `workflow_payload_1.json`
+1. Define a new file `payload_<num>.json`, for example `payload_1.json`
 
 1. Create a new directory in the `ceremonies` repository for the date on which the ceremony for the transaction will take place if it doesn't already exist, for example `2024-01-01/`
 
@@ -63,7 +63,3 @@ The proposer must combine these values into a single message, which can be a sim
 ### Git Commit Signing Configuration
 
 {{ #include ../../../../component-documents/git-commit-signing.md:steps }}
-
-### Generating PGP Keypair & Provisioning Smart Card
-
-{{ #include ../../../../component-documents/openpgp-setup.md:steps-keyfork }}

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/provision-computer.md

@@ -14,6 +14,8 @@
 
 1. Enter facility with required items and personnel and lock the facility
 
+{{ #include ../../../../component-documents/tamper-evidence-methods.md:vsbwf-procedure-unsealing }}
+
 1. Follow a given model manual to remove all radio cards, storage drive, speakers, and microphone
 
 {{ #include ../../../../component-documents/tamper-evidence-methods.md:vsbwf-procedure-sealing }}