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quorum-key-management/src/SUMMARY.md

@@ -21,8 +21,6 @@
                 * [Provision Computer](generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/provision-computer.md)
                 * [Provision SD Card](generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/provision-sd-card.md)
                 * [Provision AirgapOS](generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/provision-airgapos.md)
-                * [Provision Ceremony SD Card](generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/provision-ceremony-sd-card.md)
-                * [Copy Shardfile SD Card](generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/copy-shardfile-sd-card.md)
                 * [Provision Air-Gapped Bundle](generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/air-gapped-bundle.md)
             * [Proposer](system-roles.md)
                 * [Propose Transaction](generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/proposer/create-transaction-payload.md)

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/operator/ceremony-sd-card-provisioning.md

@@ -14,6 +14,8 @@
 
 1. Open the SD Card Booster Pack 
 
+{{ #include ../../../../component-documents/tamper-evidence-methods.md:vsbwf-procedure-unsealing}}
+
 1. Plug in a fresh SD card into computer
 
 1. Navigate to the ceremony repository for the ceremony being executed

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/operator/quorum-entropy-ceremony.md

@@ -36,8 +36,6 @@ This is a ceremony for generating entropy which is used to derive Quorum PGP key
 
 1. Once booted, remove the AirgapOS SD card and place it into High Visibility Storage
 
-1. Retrieve Shardfile SD card from High Visibility Storage and plug it into air-gapped laptop 
-
 1. Run the keyfork wizard to generate entropy, derive OpenPGP certs, load them into smart cards, and shard the secret to the generated OpenPGP keys
 
     * `keyfork wizard generate-shard-secret --threshold <M> --max <N> --keys-per-shard=<num_of_smart_cards_to_provision> --output shardfile.asc --cert-output keyring.asc`

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/procurer/procure-facility.md

@@ -10,13 +10,7 @@
 
 ## Maintenance
 
-* The facility should always be well stocked with freshly formatted SD cards
+* The facility should always be well stocked with SD cards
-
-    * There should be at least 20 microSD and 20 SD cards available for use
-
-    * Both microSD and regular SD cards should be available
-
-    * They should be formatted to `fat32` format
 
 * Usage of these SD cards:
 

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/copy-shardfile-sd-card.md

@@ -1,26 +0,0 @@
-# Copy Shardfile SD Card
-
-There should be multiple SD cards containing the shardfile data. Shardfile data is produced during a [Root Entropy](../operator/hybrid-key-provisioning.md) derivation ceremony.
-
-## Requirements
-
-* Existing Shardfile SD card
-
-* Fresh SD card(s)
-
-## Procedure
-
-1. Get the shardfile content from an existing Shardfile SD card or ceremony repository
-
-1. Plug in a fresh SD card
-
-1. Copy the shardfile to the new SD card
-
-1. Label the SD card: "Shardfile [date]"
-
-1. Optionally write an `autorun.sh` file to the Shardfile SD card containing the following command:
-
-    * `keyfork recover shard --daemon`
-
-{{ #include ../../../../component-documents/tamper-evidence-methods.md:vsbwf-procedure-sealing }}
-

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/index.md

@@ -17,5 +17,3 @@ The provisioner is responsible for:
     * Requires tamper proofing equipment to be available
 * [Provision Air Gapped Bundle](./provision-air-gapped-bundle.md)
     * Requires operators to have smart cards with PGP keys, tamper proofing equipment, AirgapOS SD card
-* [Copy Shardfile SD Card](./copy-shardfile-sd-card.md)
-    * Requires Root Entropy ceremony to be completed in order to have "Shardfile" SD cards available for copying

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/provision-airgapos.md

@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@
 ## Procedure
 
 {{ #include ../../../../component-documents/sd-formatting.md:steps }}
+- remove steps 5 through 8
 
 {{ #include ../../../../component-documents/one-time-use-airgapos.md:steps }}
 

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/provision-ceremony-sd-card.md

@@ -1,11 +1 @@
 # Provision Ceremony SD Card
-
-## Requirements
-
-{{ #include ../../basic-requirements.md:requirements }}
-
-* Booster pack of fresh SD Cards
-
-## Procedure
-
-{{ #include ../../../../component-documents/ceremony-repository.md:provision-ceremony-sd-card }}

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/provision-computer.md

@@ -10,10 +10,6 @@
 
 ## Procedure
 
-1. Retrieve non-provisioned laptop from inventory
-
-1. Enter facility with required items and personnel and lock the facility
-
 {{ #include ../../../../component-documents/tamper-evidence-methods.md:vsbwf-procedure-unsealing }}
 
 1. Follow a given model manual to remove all radio cards, storage drive, speakers, and microphone

quorum-key-management/src/generated-documents/level-2/fixed-location/provisioner/provision-sd-card.md

@@ -12,13 +12,7 @@ SD cards are provisioned and tamper proofed in packs of 5 referred to as "SD Boo
 
 * High Visibility Storage
 
-## Procedure: formatting SD Card to `fat32`
+## Procedure
-
-{{ #include ../../../../component-documents/sd-formatting.md:steps }}
-
-1. Place the provisioned SD card into High Visibility Storage
-
-### Tamper Proofing
 
 1. Select 5 SD cards to be tamper proofed from High Visibility Storage