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 ![bg left:40% 80%](img/stagex-logo.png)
 
 # Bootstrapping Reproducibility with StageX
@@ -80,12 +87,6 @@ ENTRYPOINT ["/usr/bin/mnemonicgen"]
 Approach the development of a secure toolchain by ensuring each component uses
 exactly what it needs to build - no more, no less.
 
-<!--
-TODO: include image describing traditional package building, by installing
-_every_ dependency in a single OS, with a comparison of stagex only having mini
-Containerfiles with just what each project needs.
--->
-
 <!-- Speaker notes
 Most Linux distributions are built for *compatibility* rather than *security*.
 This results in a dramatic increase of attack surface area of an operating
@@ -93,9 +94,22 @@ system. StageX is designed to allow the creation of application specific
 environments with a minimal footprint to eliminate attack surface area. Each
 component of the toolchain installs only what it needs, and only packages what
 it builds, resulting in a decreased attack surface.
+
+StageX is the first Linux multisig distribution, is one of two fully
+bootstrapped Linux distributions, is 100% reproducible and deterministic,
+and can build complicated software with as few dependencies exposed as
+possible.
 -->
 
----
+
+<hr />
+
+<!--
+TODO: include image describing traditional package building, by installing
+_every_ dependency in a single OS, with a comparison of stagex only having mini
+Containerfiles with just what each project needs. If done so, this graph can be
+moved to a separate slide.
+-->
 
 | Distribution | Signatures | Libc  | Bootstrapped | Reproducible | Rust deps |
 |--------------|------------|-------|--------------|--------------|----------:|
@@ -108,18 +122,11 @@ it builds, resulting in a decreased attack surface.
 <!-- NOTE: "Rust deps" is the amount of dependencies required to build a Rust
 hello world -->
 
-<!--
+<!---
+-- Unable to confirm the following:
 | Guix         | 1 Human    | Glibc | Yes          | Yes          | 4         |
 | Nix          | 1 Bot      | Glibc | Partial      | Mostly       | 4         |
--->
-
-<!--
-    StageX is the first Linux multisig distribution, is one of two fully
-    bootstrapped Linux distributions, is 100% reproducible and deterministic,
-    and has an incredibly low amount of dependencies required to build Rust
-    software.
--->
-
+--->
 
 <!-- Add a link to a script that confirms/reproduces the dependency count for
 building Rust hello world -->
@@ -145,15 +152,17 @@ COPY --from=build /app/target/$TARGET/release/hello /usr/bin/hello
 CMD ["/usr/bin/hello"]
 ```
 
-<!-- TODO: make pallets a thing, test this. Include RUSTFLAGS to make static in
-     the pallet -->
-
 <!-- Speaker notes
 In this example, note how we are only pulling in Rust and the dependencies
-required to invoke Rust. We don't include anything extra, which reduces the
-attack surface when compiling software.
+required to invoke Rust. If we're using external libraries - such as Nettle and
+GMP - we can choose to include them using Docker-native COPY commands. We don't
+include anything extra, which reduces attack surface when compiling software.
+---
 -->
 
+<!-- TODO: make pallets a thing, test this. Include RUSTFLAGS to make static in
+     the pallet -->
+
 ---
 
 # All packages in StageX are:
@@ -175,6 +184,7 @@ maintenance that is performed compared to most distributions. This includes:
 * Signed by the release maintainers. These maintainers each build a copy of the
   package locally and sign the containers with an OCI-compliant signature using
   well-known OpenPGP keys.
+---
 -->
 
 <!-- TODO: talk about bootstrapping, incl. corrupt compilers in distro
@@ -182,17 +192,30 @@ toolchain -->
 
 <!-- https://distrowatch.com/images/other/distro-family-tree.png -->
 
-<!-- TODO: libfakerand to act as the "why" -->
-<!--
-* Create modified compiler which injects libfakerand during build time
-* Use it to compile software from source, for example bitcoin core
-* Show that the wallet generated with bitcoin core is not random
--->
-
 ---
 
 # Multi-Signed OCI Images
 
+Multiple maintainers can each sign individual images, with the container
+runtime enforcing _multiple_ signatures by maintainers to ensure no individual
+maintainer could have tampered with an image.
+
+<!-- Speaker notes
+StageX uses the Open Container Initiative standard for images to support the
+use of multiple container runtimes. Because OCI images can be signed using
+OpenPGP keys, this allows the association of built images to trusted
+maintainers, which can enable developers to build their software using StageX,
+without having to build the entire StageX toolchain for themselves.
+
+Creating a network of trust builds a relationship between developers and
+maintainers, allowing developers to choose maintainers that implement key
+management policies that match their standards. For example, Distrust signing
+keys are always stored on smart cards or airgapped machines, avoiding key
+exfiltration attacks and limiting key exposure to trusted computation
+environments.
+---
+-->
+
 <!--
   Put some kind of graphic here to explain the association between images
   and multisig, each image being signed by at least two
@@ -212,25 +235,6 @@ digraph {
 }
 -->
 
-Multiple maintainers can each sign individual images, with the container
-runtime enforcing _multiple_ signatures by maintainers to ensure no individual
-maintainer could have tampered with an image.
-
-<!--
-StageX uses the Open Container Initiative standard for images to support the
-use of multiple container runtimes. Because OCI images can be signed using
-OpenPGP keys, this allows the association of built images to trusted
-maintainers, which can enable developers to build their software using StageX,
-without having to build the entire StageX toolchain for themselves.
-
-Creating a network of trust builds a relationship between developers and
-maintainers, allowing developers to choose maintainers that implement key
-management policies that match their standards. For example, Distrust signing
-keys are always stored on smart cards or airgapped machines, avoiding key
-exfiltration attacks and limiting key exposure to trusted computation
-environments.
--->
-
 ---
 
 # Common toolchain dependencies
@@ -312,7 +316,7 @@ According to: https://www.crowdstrike.com/blog/sunspot-malware-technical-analysi
 > - SUNSPOT monitors running processes for those involved in compilation of the Orion product and replaces one of the source files to include the SUNBURST backdoor code.
 > - Several safeguards were added to SUNSPOT to avoid the Orion builds from failing, potentially alerting developers to the adversary’s presence.
 
-<!--
+<!-- Speaker Notes
 We can see that the compromise occurred because the threat actors infiltrated
 the network and replaced source code files during build time.
 
@@ -348,7 +352,8 @@ If everyone builds stagex, everyone has to be compromised.
 
 * StageX packages the software you're already using, securely.
 * By leveraging Docker, we avoid mixing package managers and build contexts.
-* Your software, as well as your SBOM, can all be built deterministically.
+* Your software, at every point in the bootstrapped toolchain, can all be built
+deterministically.
 
 <!--
 By using StageX, you have the software you already use, with the assurance it
@@ -358,10 +363,10 @@ Package managers are notorious for introducing attack surfaces, such as
 arbitrary execution of `setup.py` or post-download scripts, and by using Docker
 as our package manager, we avoid all forms of spontaneous execution.
 
-All StageX software is built deterministically, meaning you can be sure your
-Software Bill Of Materials hasn't been tampered with. Because StageX provides a
-toolchain for you to build your software in the same manner, your software can
-be sooper dooper pooper scooper secure.
+All StageX software is built deterministically, meaning you can be sure all
+components listed in your Software Bill Of Materials hasn't been tampered with.
+Because StageX provides a toolchain for you to build your software in the same
+manner, your software can be sooper dooper pooper scooper secure.
 -->
 
 ---
@@ -376,7 +381,7 @@ Adding additional chip architecture support such as ARM and RISC-V
 
 ---
 
-# **Links**
+# Links
 
 **Matrix Chat**: #stagex:matrix.org
 
@@ -385,6 +390,3 @@ Adding additional chip architecture support such as ARM and RISC-V
 Big thank you to sponsors who have supported the development of this project:
 
 **Turnkey, Distrust, Mysten Labs**
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